informal speech

In my informal speech I feel like I got the attention of my peers with my opening statement. With that i think they became more interested in the topic and I kept their attention most of the time. Thing i think that I did well was eye contact, spoke clear, and stayed on topic. Of course i said uhhhhhh and and uhm about 20 times and i havent found a way around not saying that yet. according to brandon i said it 19 times. I thought that my information was good and stated what needed to be known and more. My conclusion was the classic "well thats it". i feel like i can come up with a better ending statement.

Brown bag speech

In my brown bag speech, overall I think I did well. I kept solid eye contact and good posture throughout the entire speech. Some of the thing I could have done better are using more hand motion. I said "uhm" a few times and that could be removed. Otherwise I presented my items clearly and the explaination behind them was clear and present. I feel that i can improve in some areas but overall did a good job.